The reason why it isn't in a flash (especially like this) is because still text is much easier to read. With the text always moving, this gets really hard to read, and makes it much easier to miss something. Now if you made buttons that went to different sections of the rules, then maybe it would be ok.
But in all honesty, the BBS rules are fine where they are. People just can't find something that is supposed to be quite obvious to find.
It's just fine -- personally, I sort of agree with you.
The problem is, well, I simply suck at Flash, and I'm on a thirty day trial. I spent the last few days of it making this, and I submitted what I had. :D
Thanks for the review!
Awesome preloader. Awesome sound effects. Oh, and the animation was pretty good too. I was sorta expecting a bunch of colors and other stupid stuff when he goes in space, but you just got lazy >:(
Good for a quick laugh though.
Intro needs to be way shorter
Ok, first of all you need to shorten your intros by a lot! I don't care that you were bored and made a flash, a lot of other people make flashes too. And sprite flashes at that.
And in my opinion, most of the jokes were not very funny, and nothing really stood out in my mind. I think you need to work on your scriptwriting, then start doing some more flash again. Oh, and the use of those sound effects were pretty weak (I mean, how many times did I hear the same generic scream in this?).
I think you need more work in setting up what you are going to have for a flash animation before you animate it. Hope that helps.
Decent short flash
It was a decent flash, the Back to the Future reference is pretty funny. But what I think you need to work on is your drawing. The lines and everything on the characters look a little.... "sharp." Try and find a way to smoothing out the lines, and sometimes the animation looks a little weak. I think that there is some stuff that you could animate better, like the little walking part. It's little, but maybe try spinning sun rays for the sun, instead of changing the lines every frame. The spinning just makes it look cleaner IMO.
So smooth out those lines, it sort of makes the flash look quickly and roughly drawn.
aye...the art and animation was intented to be like that to give that happy go lucky cartoon look, look at my other flashes, this is pretty crappy looking in comparison.
I love this flash, the atmosphere is perfectly suited to the song, and is synced to it perfectly! The effects like the blur would go off at the logical time a viewer would expect to go off.
I can't say anything bad about this, it is very well done, and really cool to watch :D
Well, I've seen much better flashes that are supposed to be art/ concept, but I think all this was was a pile of tweening of a circle. And to me, it has a nice color scheme, but not the greatest animation. I think this could have been something really good, not what seemed like 30 seconds of a circle trying to go over random lines (which didn't look that good)
Better luck next time...
meh thanks for the 6
it got a good score :D
It's sort of a basic tutorial, nothing too outstanding about it. Buit something is wrong with the arrow in the bottom corner. I think that you somehow managed to set it to go back a frame whenever you click it.
Can you tell me why I actually laughed at this?
No, that I can't do. Sorry. .....lol
This looks cool, it just needs a better and longer story line. The art is really good though.
Animation plz ;)
You know, this flash has pretty much no animation. It's like a photo show, only... it's just stick figures.
Oh yeah, watch my other episodes. So liek, you know, get it. It still got a decent score. But you're just mean. =(
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